Divine Comedy, Longfellow's Translation, Paradise — Key Ideas to Explore
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And even as a second ray is wont To issue from the first and reascend, Like to a pilgrim who would fain return,
Thus of her action, through the eyes infused In my imagination, mine I made, And sunward fixed mine eyes beyond our wont.
There much is lawful which is here unlawful Unto our powers, by virtue of the place Made for the human species as its own.
Not long I bore it, nor so little while But I beheld it sparkle round about Like iron that comes molten from the fire;
And suddenly it seemed that day to day Was added, as if He who has the power Had with another sun the heaven adorned.
With eyes upon the everlasting wheels Stood Beatrice all intent, and I, on her Fixing my vision from above removed,
Such at her aspect inwardly became As Glaucus, tasting of the herb that made him Peer of the other gods beneath the sea.
To represent transhumanise in words Impossible were; the example, then, suffice Him for whom Grace the experience reserves.
If I was merely what of me thou newly Createdst, Love who governest the heaven, Thou knowest, who didst lift me with thy light!
When now the wheel, which thou dost make eternal Desiring thee, made me attentive to it By harmony thou dost modulate and measure,
Then seemed to me so much of heaven enkindled By the sun’s flame, that neither rain nor river E’er made a lake so widely spread abroad.
The newness of the sound and the great light Kindled in me a longing for their cause, Never before with such acuteness felt;
Whence she, who saw me as I saw myself, To quiet in me my perturbed mind, Opened her mouth, ere I did mine to ask,
And she began: “Thou makest thyself so dull With false imagining, that thou seest not What thou wouldst see if thou hadst shaken it off.
Thou art not upon earth, as thou believest; But lightning, fleeing its appropriate site, Ne’er ran as thou, who thitherward returnest.”
If of my former doubt I was divested By these brief little words more smiled than spoken, I in a new one was the more ensnared;
And said: “Already did I rest content From great amazement; but am now amazed In what way I transcend these bodies light.”
Whereupon she, after a pitying sigh, Her eyes directed tow’rds me with that look A mother casts on a delirious child;
And she began: “All things whate’er they be Have order among themselves, and this is form, That makes the universe resemble God.
Here do the higher creatures see the footprints Of the Eternal Power, which is the end Whereto is made the law already mentioned.
In the order that I speak of are inclined All natures, by their destinies diverse, More or less near unto their origin;
Hence they move onward unto ports diverse O’er the great sea of being; and each one With instinct given it which bears it on.
This bears away the fire towards the moon; This is in mortal hearts the motive power This binds together and unites the earth.
Nor only the created things that are Without intelligence this bow shoots forth, But those that have both intellect and love.
The Providence that regulates all this Makes with its light the heaven forever quiet, Wherein that turns which has the greatest haste.
And thither now, as to a site decreed, Bears us away the virtue of that cord Which aims its arrows at a joyous mark.
True is it, that as oftentimes the form Accords not with the intention of the art, Because in answering is matter deaf,
So likewise from this course doth deviate Sometimes the creature, who the power possesses, Though thus impelled, to swerve some other way,
(In the same wise as one may see the fire Fall from a cloud,) if the first impetus Earthward is wrested by some false delight.
Thou shouldst not wonder more, if well I judge, At thine ascent, than at a rivulet From some high mount descending to the lowland.
Marvel it would be in thee, if deprived Of hindrance, thou wert seated down below, As if on earth the living fire were quiet.”
Thereat she heavenward turned again her face.
O Ye, who in some pretty little boat, Eager to listen, have been following Behind my ship, that singing sails along,
Turn back to look again upon your shores; Do not put out to sea, lest peradventure, In losing me, you might yourselves be lost.
The sea I sail has never yet been passed; Minerva breathes, and pilots me Apollo, And Muses nine point out to me the Bears.
Ye other few who have the neck uplifted Betimes to th’ bread of Angels upon which One liveth here and grows not sated by it,
Well may you launch upon the deep salt-sea Your vessel, keeping still my wake before you Upon the water that grows smooth again.
Those glorious ones who unto Colchos passed Were not so wonder-struck as you shall be, When Jason they beheld a ploughman made!
The con-created and perpetual thirst For the realm deiform did bear us on, As swift almost as ye the heavens behold.
Upward gazed Beatrice, and I at her; And in such space perchance as strikes a bolt And flies, and from the notch unlocks itself,
Arrived I saw me where a wondrous thing Drew to itself my sight; and therefore she From whom no care of mine could be concealed,
Towards me turning, blithe as beautiful, Said unto me: “Fix gratefully thy mind On God, who unto the first star has brought us.”
It seemed to me a cloud encompassed us, Luminous, dense, consolidate and bright As adamant on which the sun is striking.
Into itself did the eternal pearl Receive us, even as water doth receive A ray of light, remaining still unbroken.
If I was body, (and we here conceive not How one dimension tolerates another, Which needs must be if body enter body,)
More the desire should be enkindled in us That essence to behold, wherein is seen How God and our own nature were united.
There will be seen what we receive by faith, Not demonstrated, but self-evident In guise of the first truth that man believes.
I made reply: “Madonna, as devoutly As most I can do I give thanks to Him Who has removed me from the mortal world.
But tell me what the dusky spots may be Upon this body, which below on earth Make people tell that fabulous tale of Cain?”
Somewhat she smiled; and then, “If the opinion Of mortals be erroneous,” she said, “Where’er the key of sense doth not unlock,
Certes, the shafts of wonder should not pierce thee Now, forasmuch as, following the senses, Thou seest that the reason has short wings.
But tell me what thou think’st of it thyself.” And I: “What seems to us up here diverse, Is caused, I think, by bodies rare and dense.”
And she: “Right truly shalt thou see immersed In error thy belief, if well thou hearest The argument that I shall make against it.
Lights many the eighth sphere displays to you Which in their quality and quantity May noted be of aspects different.
If this were caused by rare and dense alone, One only virtue would there be in all Or more or less diffused, or equally.
Virtues diverse must be perforce the fruits Of formal principles; and these, save one, Of course would by thy reasoning be destroyed.
Besides, if rarity were of this dimness The cause thou askest, either through and through This planet thus attenuate were of matter,
Or else, as in a body is apportioned The fat and lean, so in like manner this Would in its volume interchange the leaves.
Were it the former, in the sun’s eclipse It would be manifest by the shining through Of light, as through aught tenuous interfused.
This is not so; hence we must scan the other, And if it chance the other I demolish, Then falsified will thy opinion be.
But if this rarity go not through and through, There needs must be a limit, beyond which Its contrary prevents the further passing,
And thence the foreign radiance is reflected, Even as a colour cometh back from glass, The which behind itself concealeth lead.
Now thou wilt say the sunbeam shows itself More dimly there than in the other parts, By being there reflected farther back.
From this reply experiment will free thee If e’er thou try it, which is wont to be The fountain to the rivers of your arts.
Three mirrors shalt thou take, and two remove Alike from thee, the other more remote Between the former two shall meet thine eyes.
Turned towards these, cause that behind thy back Be placed a light, illuming the three mirrors And coming back to thee by all reflected.
Though in its quantity be not so ample The image most remote, there shalt thou see How it perforce is equally resplendent.
Now, as beneath the touches of warm rays Naked the subject of the snow remains Both of its former colour and its cold,
Thee thus remaining in thy intellect, Will I inform with such a living light, That it shall tremble in its aspect to thee.
Within the heaven of the divine repose Revolves a body, in whose virtue lies The being of whatever it contains.
The following heaven, that has so many eyes, Divides this being by essences diverse, Distinguished from it, and by it contained.
The other spheres, by various differences, All the distinctions which they have within them Dispose unto their ends and their effects.
Thus do these organs of the world proceed, As thou perceivest now, from grade to grade; Since from above they take, and act beneath.
Observe me well, how through this place I come Unto the truth thou wishest, that hereafter Thou mayst alone know how to keep the ford
The power and motion of the holy spheres, As from the artisan the hammer’s craft, Forth from the blessed motors must proceed.
The heaven, which lights so manifold make fair, From the Intelligence profound, which turns it, The image takes, and makes of it a seal.
And even as the soul within your dust Through members different and accommodated To faculties diverse expands itself,
So likewise this Intelligence diffuses Its virtue multiplied among the stars. Itself revolving on its unity.
Virtue diverse doth a diverse alloyage Make with the precious body that it quickens, In which, as life in you, it is combined.
From the glad nature whence it is derived, The mingled virtue through the body shines, Even as gladness through the living pupil.
From this proceeds whate’er from light to light Appeareth different, not from dense and rare: This is the formal principle that produces,
According to its goodness, dark and bright.”
That Sun, which erst with love my bosom warmed, Of beauteous truth had unto me discovered, By proving and reproving, the sweet aspect.
And, that I might confess myself convinced And confident, so far as was befitting, I lifted more erect my head to speak.
But there appeared a vision, which withdrew me So close to it, in order to be seen, That my confession I remembered not.
Such as through polished and transparent glass, Or waters crystalline and undisturbed, But not so deep as that their bed be lost,
Come back again the outlines of our faces So feeble, that a pearl on forehead white Comes not less speedily unto our eyes;
Such saw I many faces prompt to speak, So that I ran in error opposite To that which kindled love ’twixt man and fountain.
As soon as I became aware of them, Esteeming them as mirrored semblances, To see of whom they were, mine eyes I turned,
And nothing saw, and once more turned them forward Direct into the light of my sweet Guide, Who smiling kindled in her holy eyes.
“Marvel thou not,” she said to me, “because I smile at this thy puerile conceit, Since on the truth it trusts not yet its foot,
But turns thee, as ’tis wont, on emptiness. True substances are these which thou beholdest, Here relegate for breaking of some vow.
Therefore speak with them, listen and believe; For the true light, which giveth peace to them, Permits them not to turn from it their feet.”
And I unto the shade that seemed most wishful To speak directed me, and I began, As one whom too great eagerness bewilders:
“O well-created spirit, who in the rays Of life eternal dost the sweetness taste Which being untasted ne’er is comprehended,
Grateful ’twill be to me, if thou content me Both with thy name and with your destiny.” Whereat she promptly and with laughing eyes:
“Our charity doth never shut the doors Against a just desire, except as one Who wills that all her court be like herself.
I was a virgin sister in the world; And if thy mind doth contemplate me well, The being more fair will not conceal me from thee,
But thou shalt recognise I am Piccarda, Who, stationed here among these other blessed, Myself am blessed in the slowest sphere.
All our affections, that alone inflamed Are in the pleasure of the Holy Ghost, Rejoice at being of his order formed;
And this allotment, which appears so low, Therefore is given us, because our vows Have been neglected and in some part void.”
Whence I to her: “In your miraculous aspects There shines I know not what of the divine, Which doth transform you from our first conceptions.
Therefore I was not swift in my remembrance; But what thou tellest me now aids me so, That the refiguring is easier to me.
But tell me, ye who in this place are happy, Are you desirous of a higher place, To see more or to make yourselves more friends?”
First with those other shades she smiled a little; Thereafter answered me so full of gladness, She seemed to burn in the first fire of love:
“Brother, our will is quieted by virtue Of charity, that makes us wish alone For what we have, nor gives us thirst for more.
If to be more exalted we aspired, Discordant would our aspirations be Unto the will of Him who here secludes us;
Which thou shalt see finds no place in these circles, If being in charity is needful here, And if thou lookest well into its nature;
Nay, ’tis essential to this blest existence To keep itself within the will divine, Whereby our very wishes are made one;
So that, as we are station above station Throughout this realm, to all the realm ’tis pleasing, As to the King, who makes his will our will.
And his will is our peace; this is the sea To which is moving onward whatsoever It doth create, and all that nature makes.”
Then it was clear to me how everywhere In heaven is Paradise, although the grace Of good supreme there rain not in one measure.
But as it comes to pass, if one food sates, And for another still remains the longing, We ask for this, and that decline with thanks,
E’en thus did I; with gesture and with word, To learn from her what was the web wherein She did not ply the shuttle to the end.
“A perfect life and merit high in-heaven A lady o’er us,” said she, “by whose rule Down in your world they vest and veil themselves,
That until death they may both watch and sleep Beside that Spouse who every vow accepts Which charity conformeth to his pleasure.
To follow her, in girlhood from the world I fled, and in her habit shut myself, And pledged me to the pathway of her sect.
Then men accustomed unto evil more Than unto good, from the sweet cloister tore me; God knows what afterward my life became.
This other splendour, which to thee reveals Itself on my right side, and is enkindled With all the illumination of our sphere,
What of myself I say applies to her; A nun was she, and likewise from her head Was ta’en the shadow of the sacred wimple.
But when she too was to the world returned Against her wishes and against good usage, Of the heart’s veil she never was divested.
Of great Costanza this is the effulgence, Who from the second wind of Suabia Brought forth the third and latest puissance.”
Thus unto me she spake, and then began “Ave Maria” singing, and in singing Vanished, as through deep water something heavy.
My sight, that followed her as long a time As it was possible, when it had lost her Turned round unto the mark of more desire,
And wholly unto Beatrice reverted; But she such lightnings flashed into mine eyes, That at the first my sight endured it not;
And this in questioning more backward made me.
Between two viands, equally removed And tempting, a free man would die of hunger Ere either he could bring unto his teeth.
So would a lamb between the ravenings Of two fierce wolves stand fearing both alike; And so would stand a dog between two does.
Hence, if I held my peace, myself I blame not, Impelled in equal measure by my doubts, Since it must be so, nor do I commend.
I held my peace; but my desire was painted Upon my face, and questioning with that More fervent far than by articulate speech.
Beatrice did as Daniel had done Relieving Nebuchadnezzar from the wrath Which rendered him unjustly merciless,
And said: “Well see I how attracteth thee One and the other wish, so that thy care Binds itself so that forth it does not breathe.
Thou arguest, if good will be permanent, The violence of others, for what reason Doth it decrease the measure of my merit?
Again for doubting furnish thee occasion Souls seeming to return unto the stars, According to the sentiment of Plato.
These are the questions which upon thy wish Are thrusting equally; and therefore first Will I treat that which hath the most of gall.
He of the Seraphim most absorbed in God, Moses, and Samuel, and whichever John Thou mayst select, I say, and even Mary,
Have not in any other heaven their seats, Than have those spirits that just appeared to thee, Nor of existence more or fewer years;
But all make beautiful the primal circle, And have sweet life in different degrees, By feeling more or less the eternal breath.
They showed themselves here, not because allotted This sphere has been to them, but to give sign Of the celestial which is least exalted.
To speak thus is adapted to your mind, Since only through the sense it apprehendeth What then it worthy makes of intellect.
On this account the Scripture condescends Unto your faculties, and feet and hands To God attributes, and means something else;
And Holy Church under an aspect human Gabriel and Michael represent to you, And him who made Tobias whole again.
That which Timaeus argues of the soul Doth not resemble that which here is seen, Because it seems that as he speaks he thinks.
He says the soul unto its star returns, Believing it to have been severed thence Whenever nature gave it as a form.
Perhaps his doctrine is of other guise Than the words sound, and possibly may be With meaning that is not to be derided.
If he doth mean that to these wheels return The honour of their influence and the blame, Perhaps his bow doth hit upon some truth.
This principle ill understood once warped The whole world nearly, till it went astray Invoking Jove and Mercury and Mars.
The other doubt which doth disquiet thee Less venom has, for its malevolence Could never lead thee otherwhere from me.
That as unjust our justice should appear In eyes of mortals, is an argument Of faith, and not of sin heretical.
But still, that your perception may be able To thoroughly penetrate this verity, As thou desirest, I will satisfy thee.
If it be violence when he who suffers Co-operates not with him who uses force, These souls were not on that account excused;
For will is never quenched unless it will, But operates as nature doth in fire If violence a thousand times distort it.
Hence, if it yieldeth more or less, it seconds The force; and these have done so, having power Of turning back unto the holy place.
If their will had been perfect, like to that Which Lawrence fast upon his gridiron held, And Mutius made severe to his own hand,
Longfellow's translation of Paradiso opens with a table of contents that maps the entire celestial journey: from the First Heaven (the Moon) through the spheres of Mercury, Venus, the Sun, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, the Fixed Stars, the Primum Mobile, to the Empyrean. Each canto heading names both the astronomical location and the category of souls encountered—for example, "Spirits who, having taken Sacred Vows, were forced to violate them" in the Moon, or "Theologians and Fathers of the Church" in the Sun. This structural clarity, paired with Longfellow's consistent iambic pentameter, gives the reader a reliable framework for following Dante's increasingly abstract theological arguments.
The Heavens as Moral Geography
The canto headings reveal that Dante's Paradise is organized not by chronology but by virtue. The Moon holds those who broke vows under duress; Mercury, those who sought fame through good deeds; Venus, lovers; the Sun, theologians; Mars, martyrs; Jupiter, just rulers; Saturn, contemplatives. Each sphere corresponds to a specific moral quality, and the souls appear as points of light or collective images—a cross, an eagle, a ladder. Longfellow's translation preserves this schematic clarity: the reader can anticipate that each new heaven will introduce a different category of blessed soul and a distinct visual emblem.
Longfellow's Metrical Choices
Longfellow renders Dante's terza rima into blank verse, a decision that shapes the poem's rhythm. In Canto XVIII, the eagle speaks in a sustained, oratorical voice: "Being just and merciful / Am I exalted here unto that glory / Which cannot be exceeded by desire." The absence of rhyme is compensated by enjambment and parallel syntax. Longfellow also preserves Dante's habit of direct address—"O gentle star!"—and his use of simile, as when the eagle's movement is compared to a falcon "issuing from his hood." These choices keep the translation readable while retaining the original's formal dignity.
Recurring Imagery: Light, Gems, and the Eye
Throughout the excerpts, light is described in physical terms: souls appear as "a little ruby each, wherein / Ray of the sun was burning so enkindled." The eagle's speech uses the metaphor of vision penetrating the ocean to explain humanity's limited understanding of divine justice: "As eye into the ocean, penetrates; / Which, though it see the bottom near the shore, / Upon the deep perceives it not." This image recurs in Canto XVIII, where the eagle's words are said to be "Nor voice has e'er reported, nor ink written, / Nor was by fantasy e'er comprehended." The reader should watch for how light and sight become measures of spiritual comprehension.
Dante's Role as Listener and Questioner
Dante is not a passive observer. In Canto XIX, he addresses the eagle directly: "O perpetual flowers / Of the eternal joy... break within me the great fast / Which a long season has in hunger held me." He admits his own ignorance—"Well do I know, that if in heaven its mirror / Justice Divine another realm doth make, / Yours apprehends it not through any veil"—and frames his questions as a "fast" from understanding. This posture of humble inquiry recurs in earlier cantos (e.g., Canto IV's "Questionings of the Soul") and gives the poem a dialogic structure: each encounter is an opportunity for Dante to learn, and for the reader to follow his gradual illumination.
Longfellow's Paradiso rewards a reader who pays attention to the headings: they are not mere summaries but a map of the poem's moral architecture. The blank verse moves at a stately pace, and the recurring images of light, gems, and vision unify the journey. Approach each canto as a step in a structured argument about justice, love, and knowledge—Dante's questions are your own, and the answers unfold sphere by sphere.
I remember how Dante’s ascending spheres, where each soul glows with its own perfected virtue, always made me think of Wordsworth’s quiet preludes, especially in The Poetical Works of William Wordsworth — Volume 5 (of 8) — Key Ideas to Explore. Both men saw heaven in the measured step of light across a still landscape—one cosmic, one domestic, yet each utterly certain that order blesses us gently.
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